Rita’s Visit To The Well: Her Love Was Not A Sound But A Sight To Behold...

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Open Poetry #50

Rita’s Visit To The Well: Her Love Was Not A Sound But A Sight To Behold...

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

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In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-04-05 02:41 PM

Rita dropped her love into the well near
his grave today

Then she listened… longing to hear
the echo of her love reverberating back to her

Listening…listening…when suddenly she saw the ripples
over the water spreading out slowly in a silent, sweet response

Love never dies...

...just bein' Bluesy

[This message has been edited by Bluesy Socrateaser (04-05-2018 04:51 PM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2018-04-05 04:15 PM

I have always claimed love to be a verb and not a noun. But in this case I love the 'sound' of your noun.

Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 2018-04-05 04:56 PM

Thanks so much, Miss Lori.

Based on your comment, I altered the title to reflect her more personal interpretation rather than semantics.

...just bein' Bluesy

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

3 posted 2018-04-05 05:42 PM

this is delicate and very touching, thanks

yann

Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 2018-04-05 06:55 PM

I appreciate your view, yann.

...just bein' Bluesy

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