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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2018-04-05 12:59 PM



Change can happen in an instant
or it can take years of hard work
and determination.
Change can do both
at the same time.
Some things are easier
to change than others.
Your mind is the biggest pickle
when it comes to change,
because it is so fickle.
It has a habit of forming habits.  
Your mind wants the familiar,
but  your mind is always learning
and that creates change.
Your mind can’t make up its mind,
because it is so fickle.
Its intentions are distracted
by things interacted.
Off it goes as if your mind
had a mind of its own.

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
1 posted 2018-04-05 01:49 PM


Insightful writing, Miss Lori.

"Change" always seems to have a little [or big] surprise tagging along right behind it.  

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2018-04-05 04:12 PM


You said it Blusey, you said it.
2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
3 posted 2018-04-05 05:52 PM


very accurate, changes occur more often with pains and griefs, that is some lesson too from life, thanks for the enjoyable reading
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
4 posted 2018-04-07 04:59 PM


Just got my computer outta the shop.


You betcha, Lori. Change, or the way our minds seem to do an abrupt about-face concerning this we are looking forward to.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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