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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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oh that gorgeous moon| spilling down on me placed myself upon my vanity my persona seems subdued tonight but oh that gorgeous moon spilling down on me harmony now a certainty visions beseech me I feel myself inside out not on a collision course into an exorbitant lament feel I am near the universe I bear my own and stand up strong need not a lifeline stars still beam expectations down on me and these memories are not mine reincarnation precarious transformation I shall be the sum total of the six million dollar man ©February 18, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (02-19-2017 08:26 AM).] |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Throughout your poetry JerryPat, this metaphorical phrase of yours kept rising and now it's stuck in my head: quote:Perfect! ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Bluesy, you do know to put a big smile my mug. I cannot find the words to thank you enough. But I'll try . . . Thank you. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice writing of hope...james |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you for stopping by James, and yes it is a hopeful poem ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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