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Deep Blue
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0 posted 2018-03-24 11:03 PM


Sing praises to the sky, the beautiful sky
Ever so blue, a million light years high,
Everything about her, in wonderment, seems so surreal
Dawn let the light shine, and her secrets reveal

Awake to her glorious face, making way to the glorious sun
Crowned by the angel, will you not come,
Across the borders of time, through the mystic veil
The clouds shall fade, with the windy sail

Like a bird ever so higher, disappearing into the sky
Into the everlasting, the soul learns to fly,
My arms are raised, to fulfill my desire
Take on the image, as a flame of fire

Can you feel the riches of the deep drawing you nearer
Leave this world behind, let your thoughts be clearer,
Don't be afraid, stand tall and be free
Uncover the mystery, the secrets of infinity

The light shall shine from heaven above
Take on the spirit, being forever in love,
To your charm, I bow, and humbly step aside
And marvel at your magnificence far and wide

Blue, the sky is ever so beautiful and blue
Be taken in wonder, be found to be true,
Like a lovely lady, of perfect art
Standing by the ocean that flows through your heart




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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
1 posted 2018-03-24 11:29 PM


Inspirational.

...just bein' Bluesy

ethome
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2 posted 2018-03-26 12:34 PM


Exceptionally uplifting writing.....beautiful!!

Eric

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Poet In Pink
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3 posted 2018-03-26 06:41 PM


Beautifully penned throughout ~ Love the imagery your words conjured up   Much enjoyed ~ Alana
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2018-03-28 10:07 PM


fine4 writing...james
Deep Blue
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5 posted 2018-03-30 04:35 PM


Thank you Bluey, Eric, Alana and James for your wonderful comments.
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