Her Muzzle Velocity Was Excessive: But She Was Way Too Cool To Lose...

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Open Poetry #50

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-03-04 03:33 PM

Shots in the dark
aimed at a heart
that just isn't there

A fool and her gun,
thinks she's having fun
at the expense of the bullet

...just bein' Bluesy

[This message has been edited by Bluesy Socrateaser (03-04-2018 04:18 PM).]

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2018-03-04 04:05 PM

I loved this short, but very expressive poetry. Get the gist of your thouhts and stop already.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

2 posted 2018-03-04 04:18 PM

Thanks, Jerry...'preciate your comments.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2018-03-04 08:34 PM

I think I resemble that remark Bluesy, but I ain't admitin' to nothin' cuz...ah ...well ....you know. ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2018-03-05 01:01 AM

Ah! Takin' the 'fifth' on me, eh?

Good girl!

...just bein' Bluesy

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