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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2018-02-28 05:34 AM

Spring gave us a tease.
She whispered warm to please.
She shimmered in sunny delight.
Winter doldrums were set to flight.
The wind was with her as always,
blowing birds and bees different ways.
And following behind was a little rain,
just enough to wet the window pane.
Spring gave us a taste we want to linger.
but it will take a month to bring her
to stay every day.

LGR(C)2/28/18

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

1 posted 2018-02-28 11:35 AM

This was skillfully penned, Miss Lori.
You're not only a keen Kansas observer, but you interpret and translate your surroundings with the beauty of an Audobon painting.

Superb!
Spring? Bring it on!

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2018-02-28 11:38 AM

Why thank you so much kind sir. My nature poems do have a tendency to be my better work.

~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

3 posted 2018-02-28 12:44 PM

quote:
"My nature poems do have a tendency to be my better work"

Perhaps that's because it's what's outside that's coming in on a breeze that you process better and then send back out in words than it is what's inside that's being processed and metered according to one inhibition or another, some of which is no one elses' beeswax, finally finding its way to the outside.

...Maybe

Pay no attention to this, Miss Lori, unless you're really bored. Then just read it as fast as you can several times over.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2018-02-28 01:09 PM

I'm not bored I'm busy as the dickens but it sure made for a nice break.

~L

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2018-03-23 10:21 PM

nice...james

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2018-03-24 01:04 AM

Thanks James! ~L

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI

7 posted 2018-03-26 06:06 PM

Love this Lori Lou!!! A delightful read from start to finish Always enjoy your poetry sweet friend!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2018-03-26 08:05 PM

Pinkypeep!
Thank you! Hugs, hugs, hugs! ~L

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