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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-02-27 01:27 PM


It took me awhile to know the difference
between her painted smile and her self assurance
After all, I was falling in love

The way we met, our eyes fixated, looking back I should have waited, but then one touch and I was baited
After all, I was falling in love

How long those warm summer breezes blew, from across the bay into her room,
where passions played with our hearts renewed
After all, we were falling in love

Still, it took me awhile to know the difference,
between her love and my assurance,
that I had fallen in love

...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2018-02-27 03:36 PM


That is so sweet Bluesy! I just love reading your love poems. They always make me smile ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2018-02-27 04:39 PM


,,,and you smiling makes me smile, Miss Lori!

...just bein' Bluesy

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