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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2018-02-26 05:13 AM



There are those creatures
that discard their outer layer.
As they grow into new tender skin
they are vulnerable.
I am such a creature.
In transition,
I seek shelter in my words
while my new facade firms.
My heart exposed,
it feeds on any kindnesses
that drift by it.
Soon enough I will toughen up
in my new skin with wrinkles
and spots and tufts of gray.
Safe in my own skin again
I will remember where
the kindnesses came from.

LGR(C)2/26/18




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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
1 posted 2018-02-26 08:28 PM


As long as we're breathing we can come to know more of our 'inner selves'...but some kindness coming from outside of ourselves gives us a warm, cuddly feeling that we just can't imitate alone.

I guess that's what boxes of gooey chocolates are for.  
Good, insightful poetry, Miss Lori.  


...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2018-02-26 08:45 PM


Bluesy why don't you just poke me in the eye with a stick? What are ya trying to do kill me? I'm not supposed to eat chocolate anymore. waaaaaaahhhhhhhhh. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
3 posted 2018-02-26 08:49 PM


A stick in the eye is worth two in the...Nah! I'll start over.

What about just being smeared with chocolate-covered cherries? Ha-ha-ha!

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2018-02-26 09:14 PM


Why you dirty dog! How'd you know those are Dennis' favorite?  
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