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2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2017-01-15 07:18 PM

Let us be always ready to sail,
The quest continues,
The winter is temporary,
Let us sleep a few moments,
Let us replace the certainties by bunches of flowers,
Let us watch stars taking the tea,
We have to speak to forests,
To welcome new friends,
Let us be ready to sail,
The sea stretches out the immense arms,
A light waits for us,
However certainly the sky exists.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2017-01-15 10:17 PM

Ehhh . . . So is everything temporary, yann. Winter and the rest of the seasons . . . We, too are temporary, but we must make the best of what we have.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

2 posted 2017-01-16 12:04 PM

I feel you're saying that our peace, our inner peace, is realized through a greater respect and appreciation. But putting my own interpretation aside, I enjoyed reading your work and giving thought of it.

BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2017-01-16 02:24 AM

yes jerry, so true,

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2017-01-16 02:29 AM

Thanks bluesy, you used perfect words, and deliver a real possibility of the poem, my goal yes, was inner peace, and put far some sadness of the winter days

have a good day
yann

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2017-01-16 07:39 AM

Good one Yann!
Winter can really be hard on people's emotions. Cabin fever alone can make for a cranky bunch.~L

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2017-01-16 06:17 PM

thanks lori for the compliment and comprehension, I didn't know cabin fever
yann

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

7 posted 2017-01-31 04:28 AM

Thank goodness winter is temporary, the same goes for summer, having a hot one here in Oz.
well penned Yann

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

8 posted 2017-01-31 12:47 PM

thanks tracie, all seasons have a limit, fortunately they offer variety and don't last, thanks for appreciating the poem

yann

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

9 posted 2017-01-31 05:13 PM

fine writing, Yann !

I especially love the line:

"We have to speak to forests"

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