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The Evening Mist
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The Evening Mist |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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The Evening Mist Along the dark, deep forest edge, just beyond a crimson sunset and its velvet-violet afterglow, a heady calm and silence falls and rises to dance, with the moonlit shadows and shades of a thousand generations forever lost, through these ancient ‘endless’ hills beneath a sharp cosmic crescent carving out its slice of star field splendor as it has some billion times before. This place is from another world of immortal Deep-Time dreams. Suddenly somehow another Spring has passed; and here one comes to know our lives are the evening mist. --- b. e. adams (6/2/2014) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Last line is the wake-you-up kicker, Bruce. Descriptive and magical are your thoughts and words. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You imagery is so magical Bruce, and a pleasure to read.  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Magical is the word, Bruce. That's what I feel while reading this. Ida |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks so much JP, Martie, and Ida !! (I live amid these 400 million yr. old magical/mystical 'endless' mountains and the forests and come from 1500 or more years of Celtic ancestry ... it all has its powerful effects on one!) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You paint with words and the finished product is magical!! |
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