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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Trickling slowly Evaporating coolness Stinging in your eyes |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Eh . . . I relate to this one big time. Nice work. ~*~ Less depends on the size of the dog in a fight than the size of the fight in the dog. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
In honor of our record breaking heat today on the heels of record breaking cold a few days ago. Jeeze! Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I hear you. I know it's hot in Kansas. ~*~ Less depends on the size of the dog in a fight than the size of the fight in the dog. ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ha! Love it and am in to total empathy today... but mines more like . . . Sweating salty flow running too hot to cool my body stinging in my eyes jwesley |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
A haiku that reminds me of one of my favourite films: Coolhand Luke. |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
crazy times crazy weather and the sweet of sweat cool work ! |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Let the long hot summer begin! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
it was most certainly that kind of day 'round these parts yesterday and today ... finely succinct and effectively descriptive 'write!' |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Lori.Had to smile as I remembered the "old timers" saying "men sweat,women glowed or glistened" .LOL |
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