Open Poetry #49 |
Closer |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Closer In the late hours of the night I snuggle in my bed and contemplate my life. I know that some say that what will be will be... still everynight I wish you were here with me, I know you say you love me and I know that I love you still I desire that kind of love thats closer when the day is through. JamesLee 10May 2014 |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
"still I desire that kind of love thats closer when the day is through." From all you have written, I know that that is so true for you. Never lose that desire. Your heart knows what it needs. Lori |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
simple, pure, and pleasant Romanticism! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Life is meant to have love, a love to snuggle next to in the night. ~*~ How come abbreviated is such a long word? ~*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A lovely write! M |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
so true and romantic, thanls for the enjoyable read, james, yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Lori, secondhanddreampoet, Jerry, nakdthoughts and 2islander2 for the wonderful responses...James |
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