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Sentiments Distilled
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Sentiments Distilled |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sentiments Distilled In the cold dew of a starlit morning, my thoughts glisten naked to the chimes of night My lips trace the memory of compelling voice, sung into my soul like a gypsy prayer I, the apostle to the waves of your grin, sweet in its airiness, yet cool in its sting And I turn away from what is ruminant truly this soul, of illusions, choking out any spark Past tense, stopper the bottle! It is cold, let it be cold. I have no use of such sentiment! Until I realize the sky bears no sun, and the rain that seems so warm, emanates in sacrament The realm of day leading night by the hand, in one long journey where I love you Copyright Kkh 5/2/14 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Great title, perfect ending... I especially loved everything in between. Wonderful to read you here, TD. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
This is a special treat! Your style is unique and stunning! Rereading is like going back for seconds on cheese cake! MMMMMMM! Lori  |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Enjoyed. Good to see you posting You have been missed. Jo Perry |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How absolutely precious are your words here, dear Kathleen. And the title is so perfectly adapt. Wonderful to read you. Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand-fine imagery as usual and in your very unique style, Kathleen ! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
great write, love the sensibility of words and images, thanks have a nice day yann |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
Passion, the denial, and then the acceptance of love. Beautifully written. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful my friend --- really liked the last line too... jimmy |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
it's been so long since I've read you, however, some things never change, your still a master of words....lovely, simply lovely |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The journey whether walked or not, shall always have the path of our thoughts to carry on the sentiments. Nicely written |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So nice to see so many familiar poets. Thanks for the nice responses m'friends. I'll be around a bit more and will be looking for your works. |
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