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Relentless Dawn
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Relentless Dawn |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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(for hump day) Dawn is relentless in its coming of the day Earthquakes and hurricanes will not delay dawn’s arrival The sun always rises on time Dawn’s light may be late Still dawn is relentless bringing a new day |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, Dawn is relentless, Lori, and today I'm again starting a bit late. You underscored the start of the day perfectly. ~*~ Why is bra singular and panties plural? ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
"hump" day is certainly relentless amid the "Runaway American Dream" ... |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
The future waits for no one...The sad lament of a Sunday night. Good morning! Lori  |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Bruce I believe Hump Day is an 'Island of Hope' in a work week of 'I Think I Can' make it to 'TGIF'. Lori |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Enjoyed your words Lori and the replies.Together it all adds up. Jo |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Jo, Sometimes I get a better understanding of a poem from reading the comments and sometimes they are just plain funny. Thanks for the read and comment. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Intense and comforting to a certain degree ... new hope arises with dawn's light. But sometimes after hurricanes and earthquakes the vision might reveal devastation that demands all our good will and optimism to move forward ... but our instinct of survival acts like a rising sun, we find a way out of darkness and start anew in the attempt to mend what is broken ... Thank you, dear Lori, you made me deeply appreciate the blue sky this morning! Love, Margherita |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thank you Margherita for sharing your feelings on my poem. It started out as a early morning "I'm really not in the mood for work" poem. I'm delighted you found it to be much more uplifting. Lori |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
this continuity is what makes us wake up each day, feeling comfort in it all Good thoughts here |
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