Open Poetry #49 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Listen If I was to write of the delites of a sweet Hawaiian night I'd write of you. Listen to the winds softly blowing as if they were knowing that you are in my arms finding no finer place to partake of the grace of your silky charms. JamesLee 28April 2014 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Using nature to accept the fact that you and your lover are wonderfully occupied is a true measure of poetical maneuvering, James. ~*~ Why is bra singular and panties plural? ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Well, there is no lovelier way to make the readers dream of charming Hawaiian nights, dear James. It is a perfect little romantic gem! Margherita ![]() |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Silky and smoothe. You heighten my senses and took me there. ![]() Beautiful poem James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Jerry, Margherita and Blues for the nice responses...James |
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