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Open Poetry #49

The Voice of Love

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2014-04-19 11:13 PM

   The Voice of Love

Love should be
as a cello’s bow
drawing one voice
from separate
heart-strings
in a melody that
plays forever
beyond the
farthest edge
  of Time,
neither selfish
and bittersweet,
nor tempest–bound
to vanish just beyond
the storms of life like a
lost and fading rainbow.
With only words to give,
how can I catch and hold
the rarest of beautiful
dreams that is … you ?!

           --- b. e. adams (4/19/2014)

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2014-04-20 02:29 AM

loved the image of the cello and orchestra, the poem is touching and delicacy inspiring, very well done

yann

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2014-04-20 03:25 AM

A beautiful voice indeed, Bruce.
Ida

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2014-04-20 04:25 AM

Lovely poem DreamPoet, lovely!
E

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2014-04-20 09:15 AM

Ahhh . . . I personally think love needs and grants tempest moments for the the sweeter the feeling.

~*~ Love is friendship set on fire. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (04-21-2014 06:45 PM).]

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

5 posted 2014-04-21 02:05 PM

such love seems so elusive at times, almost too good to land and stay for long.
I enjoyed the sentiment and feel the longing of the heart for such bliss many can only pine away for

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