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Bloodmoon
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Bloodmoon |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Bloodmoon She blushes tonight as he cloaks her within his shadow. Still, she stays, there, pulled against gravity locked in his darkness. Though, a short time feels like lifetimes. She blushes, at his whispers. They've been spoken before. Still, she stays and glows that crimson red, he loves to see her wear, when he is there, when he is there. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Love this! Read this with trepidation... didn't know if I was going to find myself neck deep in hellfire and brimstone. Knew it would be good even so. But, my oh, my! What a wonderful suprise! I adore where you went with this. Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Wonderful thoughts on the blood moon phenomena, Ms E. ~*~ Love is friendship set on fire. ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you for your comments Lori and JP. Ms. E |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Enjoyed.I finally went to bed and so only saw the pale but stil beautiful moon, missed the glow. Best to you, Jo [This message has been edited by latearrival (04-16-2014 12:30 AM).] |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Wonderful, unique take on the "Blood Moon", Edna. Ida |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thanks Jo! I've had four hours of sleep today. I spent my sleeping hours watching the moon. I guess I was moonstruck! Lol |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thanks Ida and Jo! |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
what a joy to read your poem...I always enjoy her ever changing glow of her complexion. I find her orange glow quite beautiful, as well as her red. simply enjoyed it.  |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you Ken. You are kind, E |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most interesting 'write!' |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
romantic and sultry, I liked |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Oooh, this was a nice read to wake up to. So much beneath the surface, and the inevitable coming loss of something so chrished. Beautifully done, Ms. E. Michael |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
this is lovely and feels both primal and romantic a nice blend |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Dreampoet, Michael, EmmaRose, Thank you for taking time to comment. You guys rock! E |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
totally emotionnal, thanks for the delicate words yann |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
For gentle Yann... you're welcome. E |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
pleasure to read...James |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you James. |
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