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Shadowing Secrets
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Shadowing Secrets |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 what could take us away or withhold secrets look to the clandestine, concealed stars which soothe shattered thoughts for unsullied scent mends the shadows allowing the sun to apprehensively show itself since irreversible selfishness hides dark secrets ©March 20, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ Love is friendship set on fire. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Pretty deep thoughts here my friend. "for unsullied scent mends the shadows" is my favorite. Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Much obliged, my friend Lori, don't know about it being deep, these ideas just come to me and sometimes I'm able to work them out. ~*~ Love is friendship set on fire. ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Wow, JP, if I may say, a kick arse of a poem! Ms. E...still a lady. Lol |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Ms E. Good to see you again. ~*~ Love is friendship set on fire. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice...James |
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kingsangel Member
since 2009-11-04
Posts 50 |
Loved it....left me with the image of a someone wearing a mask ... kingsangel |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
o yes those deep dark secrets that haunt and wont let go can make one go mad |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Heavy thinking and a truism to ponder. You did an outstanding job with this one. Enjoyed, my friend! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate your thoughts, L. ~*~ Tell the truth, but tell it slant.--Emily Dickimsom ~*~ |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
There is a dark tumult of emotion in this one, Jerry...I can't quite put my finger on it...but maybe that is the point no? What makes the sun so apprehensive...if not the clandestine...? Yes...there's that tension in this...that runs just below the pretty words...and pricks the soul into wariness... ~*~write on~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
great visual ... superb ending lines in particular! It never ceases to amaze me how vastly different the 'writing styles' are of the poets who grace the fine blue sands of "P.I.P-land" by the cyber-sea with their sublime 'word-painted' tapestries ! ... |
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