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Go To Hell With You
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Go To Hell With You |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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I was taught back in Sunday School, That craving and the act were the same, And God rebukes your craving tool, No matter others fanned the flame. So! If we are punished, us two, And to hell’s fires we must descend, Come then, and let me stir your roux, Rather go to hell with a friend! ©March 19, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ Love is friendship set on fire. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (04-11-2014 11:45 AM).] |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Enjoyed the read, Naturally things like this stir my imagination, for I am sure my thoughts have earned passage over and over and over again. Gloom |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
What a title! I didn't know what to expect! Certainly wasn't expecting this sweet little rhymer here. This is really quite delightful. Good write my friend. Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Lori. Yeah, I had fun with this one to be sure. Wrote it for a special someone. ~*~ Love is friendship set on fire. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I hear you Gloom about you earning that passage over and over. Ahhh . . . Me too. ~*~ Love is friendship set on fire. ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
methinks we'd all meet a lot of 'friends' in hell! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Methinks you are correct in your methinking, Bruce. Heh.Heh ~*~ Love is friendship set on fire. ~*~ |
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