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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ruby It happened on the fourth of July, I was the other guy, later I listened more closely to the words of the song and knew I'd done wrong but at that time I didn't follow the lines, and I didn't know of the sadness that lived within the words of the rhyme. "It wasn't me that started that ole crazy Asian war but I was more than proud to go and do my patriotic chore and if I could move I'd get my gun and put her in the ground, Ruby, don't take your love to town." You see, to me I was happy she was mine, to me Ruby was just another sexy woman looking to have a good time. JamesLee 9April 2014 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Long live "sexy woman looking to have a good time." ~*~ Love is friendship set on fire. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
James, I really like what you did with this! What a cool perspective to take. I enjoyed this very much! Lori  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very interesting 'penning' on a song 'bout the very worst of times ... |
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