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Open Poetry #49
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EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
0 posted 2014-04-01 09:39 AM


I caught your storm
its glistening droplet
the arrow resonating
deep in the rush of
new orchards

but my heart slips
ailing of lost expectation

in lieu of the wildflowers
anemia's drought closes
the fields of first promise

collapsed on the downbeat
fade of the flowerbeds
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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2014-04-01 09:47 AM

Oh my, some days it is better, much better, to just stay in bed and cover up your head.

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EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
2 posted 2014-04-01 09:52 AM

yep, you got it !
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
3 posted 2014-04-01 12:09 PM

i will say just like Jerry, enjoyed your poem,


yann
OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2014-04-02 03:38 AM

So sorry to hear it, EmmaRose.  Such is life.  However, you made beauty out of it.

Owl
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