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Open Poetry #49

Jack Napes
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since 2014-02-22

Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb

0 posted 2014-03-07 06:18 PM

he was old when young
with a rifle in his hands
now old yet younger

Touch, but don't look

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 2014-03-07 11:09 PM

One hell of a lot of meaning in 15 words.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 2014-03-08 08:21 PM

A few words that struck some rich detail in my mind. Nicely done.

Michael

Jack Napes
Member

since 2014-02-22

Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb

3 posted 2014-03-08 10:24 PM

Thanks guys. You two know how it was/is.

Semper Fi!

Touch, but don't look

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2014-03-08 10:45 PM

So do I, although I wasn't there.

~*~ There was a sign on the lawn at a drug re-hab center that said 'Keep off the Grass'. ~*~

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