Richy
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since 2003-05-03
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2014-01-11
08:44 AM
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History is something you cannot undo
Closure can often be hard to walk through
Our words are in prison, locked up in a pen
Sentenced for passion we couldn’t, comprehend
Feelings that only our sadness can cell
Tales that only an hourglass tells
Places we meet are led off to the slaughter
Letters of smoke turns the eye, into water
Every new tear drop is born with a scar
The longer we’re gone the nearer the far
Blood is a river that we only follow
Scarlet is present each time, that we swallow
Sometimes I’m breathing for only the still
Sometimes I’m slashing the sky with my quill
Words are the steps on the paper of journey
Dark on the light will forever, have earned me
Yes it is true I have taken, a lover
A damsel of doubt and doll of discover
I know her as balladry, princess of paean
She is the potion that pumps through my veins
I hate her like love and love her, like scorn
The ivory ink is the hunger I shorn
It drips from my voice when I look in her eyes
The blushing of dawn is starting to rise
Our words were the proof of rapture and sorrow
There is no now, only then, and tomorrow
We burnt our emotions to understand, trust
When it is the poetry, trying to know us
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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
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2014-01-11
09:41 AM
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Interesting poetry giving a measure of thought to life and its peccadilloes makes for interesting reading.If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear.
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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
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2014-01-11
01:37 PM
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Our words were the proof of rapture and sorrow.....
Yea that!!!! ~sigh~
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EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
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2014-01-11
02:43 PM
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I like how your poetry just naturally flows, lending itself to some song that should be sung
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Richy
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2014-01-11
03:32 PM
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tnank you Jerry i appreciate the visit.. Lori your kindness is always so welcomed
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Richy
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2014-01-11
03:35 PM
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Emma that is so nice of you to say..
thanks for all the wonderful support
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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
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2014-01-11
05:46 PM
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fine writing...James
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CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
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Alberta, Canada
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2014-01-13
07:12 PM
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These are great little gems, Richy, thank you. I like them all, but particularly:
"Every new tear drop is born with a scar"
CG
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Richy
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2014-01-17
06:18 PM
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thank you James and Castle Guard, that was very kind of you to say..
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