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Open Poetry #49
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springtao
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since 2014-03-04
Posts 25


0 posted 2014-03-04 07:26 PM



Our Love

Is not cast in stone
Like Donatello carving eyes

More like a fire turned
From hot to cold goodbyes

~s



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Jack Napes
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since 2014-02-22
Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb
1 posted 2014-03-04 08:58 PM


Well sculpted poetry, taking love from one extreme to the the other.

Excellente'!

Touch, but don't look

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2014-03-04 10:33 PM


Welcome to the fine blue sands of 'P.I.P.-land' by the cyber-sea!
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
3 posted 2014-03-05 12:58 PM


excellent images, very relevant about end love, much enjoyed

yann


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2015-09-03 12:24 PM


very nice...james
jjote
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since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2015-09-05 11:28 AM


so short and bitter-sad, but says it all a lot. Liked this
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