JerryPat2
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South Louisiana
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2014-01-11
08:05 AM
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passion boils up and over dribbling out words and phrases which are never heard portion of them fall ungracefully toward yesterday’s quarrel merely adding more fuel to the inferno within my thoughts trying to tiptoe around the wreckage trying to not disturb all that unfinished business
©December 16, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton
If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear.
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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
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2014-01-12
06:30 AM
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Carrying all that through the night and into the next day is not an enviable burden. Though it is true, nothing fuels a fire quite like passion.
One can always tell when someone else has been "tip-toeing" about stealthily, the soles are worn but the heels are like new. ...just bein' Bluesy
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JerryPat2
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South Louisiana
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2014-01-12
08:17 AM
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Quite an interesting concept about the hells and soles, Bluesy. Thank you for stopping by.If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear.
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
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2014-01-12
11:50 AM
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I love this! It is so true it hurts. I understand completely my friend.
Lori
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JerryPat2
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South Louisiana
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2014-01-12
12:00 PM
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Glad you like my poem, Lori, sorry that it hurt.If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear.
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EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
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Midwest
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2014-01-14
08:46 PM
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I can feel the breath that is tight when anxiety strikes throughout the unraveling of this potent poem
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JerryPat2
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2014-01-14
08:59 PM
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Yep. I have that problem, and sometimes it is a problem. I have medicine for it, but don't much like to take it. Thank you, Emma.If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear.
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