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Blood on the Snow
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Blood on the Snow |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Sharp talons pierce the flesh Blood drips on the snow Winter survivor flies off LGR©3/3/14 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hopefully the blood wasn't yours, Lori. Maybe metaphorically. ~*~ There was a sign on the lawn at a drug re-hab center that said 'Keep off the Grass'. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
No!LOL I had a T-shirt one time that had a rat on it, flipping off an eagle that was decending upon him talons first, encaptioned "last great act of defiance". I turned that into a "haiku moment" Your poem about the winter storm inspired me to write about winter. Thanks Jerry Lori [This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (03-03-2014 06:44 PM).] |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Ouch !! what goes on in their world, can stay in their world, (Not that ours is without that blood curdling scream ) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
At least you had a chance to comment knowing what the poem was about, Emma. I, on the other hand . . . ~*~ There was a sign on the lawn at a drug re-hab center that said 'Keep off the Grass'. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Emmarose, don't look now but we all share the same "world". If it makes you feel any better, I didn't hear anything but the flap of wings when I wrote it. Lori  |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Well Jerry, maybe you shouldn't comment until you know what the poem is about hmm? Lori |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
scary, may be I mislead my reading, but beautiful, thanks yann |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Well Yann if you envisioned some bird of prey silently snagging a small mammal from the snow to consume in order to survive, than you got it. It's not so scary the cute little fuzzball that got ate never knew what hit it. Lori |
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