Richy
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since 2003-05-03
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2014-03-01
03:04 PM
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The sky today, seems a little confused
The wind is changing as quick as its mood
Earlier today it was, kind of rowdy
Then its mind seemed really cloudy
It’s finally freeing lots, of tears
That it’s been holding back, for years
The atmosphere seems quite bipolar
The sun is trying, to sell its solar
The air is trying to hold its breath
A temporary, slice of death
The owl, never found out who
The face of heaven’s turning blew
I love, how the whirlwinds sing their song
And all of the flora, dances along
A world of branches, locked in dance
A green embrace of pulse and prance
Back, and forth, they swing and sway
A drunken cloud gets carried away
Whether to or, whether for
To the dessert, for the poor
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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
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2014-03-01
04:01 PM
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I need to have a quick shot of sour mash to clear my head after reading this. So many things to keep up with had my head reeling. Heh.Heh
~*~ People who think they know everything are a great annoyance to those of us who do. ~*~
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Richy
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2014-03-01
04:08 PM
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have one for me too friend..
im still on daylight java time..
not quite yet, burp o thirty
thanks jerry
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Jack Napes
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Phaedra's Womb
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2014-03-01
04:41 PM
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That which falls from my sky is not tears. They're more like heavily sugared frosted flakes.
A cool, graduating diversity in your poetry Richy. Too bad a drop-out like me shamed it by reading.
I like that little gal standing in Napa Valley.
Touch, but don't look
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Richy
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2014-03-01
05:14 PM
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thanks jack..
i hope your flakes fall into a lake of milk so folks can enjoy the break in fasting
no shame in dropping out, especially in reading my dribble
dropping is gravity's doing..
have a great weekend
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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2014-03-01
05:27 PM
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Richy your words just whirl here! You're so funny
Lori
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Richy
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2014-03-01
05:33 PM
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like funny how.. what do you mean im funny.. like a clown.. like im here to amuse you.. what do you mean, funny how?
(scene from Goodfellahs)
haha
thanks Lori, i hope you have a satisfying saturday
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