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Open Poetry #49

Across the Void

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2014-03-01 07:42 AM

a man and a woman
lucky in love and precious
fate walked in and kissed them both
kisses wet, sloppy, thirsty
from an unplanned tenderness
romance fluttered
love came next there was no doubt
their chemistry delicious
played one off the others substantial
in the beginning of her purring
on purpose as fate
walked them down the primrose blushing
passion concentrated and gifted
translovely dream cooing
across the abyss
separating them from their naughty
they talked of love needful
secrets were confessed fragile
vowed to leave the past behind
shredded and troubled
their bond will be sewn husky
he closes his eye tender
she holds out her attractive
together they are damaged

~*~ People who think they know everything are a great annoyance to those of us who do. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2014-03-01 07:49 AM

"together they are damaged"
Jerry I'd say love is the best port in any storm. We all are damaged to some degree nobody gets out of this life unscathed.
Loved this write!

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2014-03-01 08:03 AM

Thank you, Lori, and yup, I know you are right.

~*~ People who think they know everything are a great annoyance to those of us who do. ~*~

Jack Napes
Member

since 2014-02-22

Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb

3 posted 2014-03-01 04:50 PM

Fate.

That's the one hidden behind destiny. From a spontaneous beginning, like the big bang, you know it happened but you don't know how.

After 7 wives, you'd think I could come up with a better response.

You've got something there Jerry. Most definitely, you've got something.

Touch, but don't look

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2014-03-01 05:12 PM

Seven wives, eh, and I thought I was over doing it with three. Thanks for being here, guy.

~*~ People who think they know everything are a great annoyance to those of us who do. ~*~

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