Reachin' Out to Capture A Moment

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Open Poetry #49

Reachin' Out to Capture A Moment

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2017-01-03 11:34 PM

Reachin' Out to Capture A Moment

Oh Suzie,
I really did Love you;
I'm 100 per cent serious,
I wasn't just messing around,
I was reachin' out to capture a moment.

but you weren't as serious about us;
you had lots of things going on
over 2000 miles away
on the other side of playing around.

Time is not on my side
when two hearts are separated by a deep blue sea
still I hope and pray
you found the joy of your life,
sadly, it wasn't me.

JamesLee
1/3/17

"Reachin' out to capture a moment"...a verse
from the song Wendy.

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

1 posted 2017-01-03 11:44 PM

I can relate to this feeling James... distance builds no walls to corral emotion... nicely written

Ari Squire
Member
Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane

2 posted 2017-01-04 09:05 PM

Love is seldom "six of one and a half dozen of the other".

How many puppies in a litter?

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2017-01-05 01:55 PM

Love hurts..sometimes
Nice writing james..

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2017-01-06 02:30 AM

Not many looked to "Wendy" for a philosophical message, but finding one as you did James and even correlating it with your fine poetry, sad as it may be, shines a light on your sentiments as a sweet reminisce.

BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

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