Open Poetry #49 |
when trees think |
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
When trees think, They make our safest collusive, They tell us the sunken lane Where to walk if we are old. They speak to us as birds, Of this time which makes brooks, They tell us not to listen to any more The sneaky wind which hurt us, Their peace is as a foliage Who protects us from insults, We listen to them, respect them, They offers us any inspiration |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Very nicely arranged poem. Trees talk. Well, yes, I suppose they do in their own way, and some of us hear them in our own way. Interesting poetry, Yann. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks jerry, trees can talk to poet' ear and eyes, they are alive, or id they don't , human imagination and poetry make them talk and breathe, thanks for the nice comment have a good day yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful, yann. Trees are earth's great gift. Ida |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful, yann. Trees are earth's great gift. Ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks a lot ida, best wishes yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Trees are a wonderful gift to earth, yann. Thank you for pointing it out. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Trees are a wonderful gift to earth, yann. Thank you for pointing it out. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks again, Ida, since you commented twice, i guess you liked the poem yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Trees are really neat when they are blowing in the wind and talking to us...james |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks James for the poetical words, i love trees yann |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Always good to read your poetry yann. Just out looking for the real me... |
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