Open Poetry #49 |
life is very short |
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
The life is very short, Some stars in the sky, Some loves And You must go away, The life is a sugar cube, She dissolves In a glass of water, The life is very short, A star at which we look, It is necessary to look for the soul mate To be invited there … |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes indeed, Yann, Life has us by the short hairs, you betcha. ~*~ People who think they know everything are a great annoyance to those of us who do. ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
YES indeed ! |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
It's such a long trip, I wouldn't want to make it alone. For some, all they have is stars. Maybe that's enough. Your offering is warm and easy on the senses poetry. Touch, but don't look |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Maybe not as short as we think, yann. Enjoyed your thoughts. Ida |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
It is in the invitation, when one is invited. Enjoyed Yann, Ms. E |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks Jerry, bruce, Jack, Ida and Ebony, for reading and gentle comments, best wishes yann |
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springtao Junior Member
since 2014-03-04
Posts 25 |
much enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice...James |
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