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2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2016-12-14 09:42 PM

00:58 am!
The joints of the stone floor sparkle,
I read a novel of Orhan Pamuk,
Tired of all the verbosities,
The fate has the beak and the wings of a crow,
It is the worst sins,
Those who love me go out of the shade.

01:03 am

I write this poem,
I do not know if it is of the poetry,
It is maybe the fate also,
This fate which kills me,

01:05 am

Time goes by,
I am a mediocre trinket which ignores the time,
All people manipulate me,
Are we alive demand Rimbaud?
Maybe not, after all
But we are toys, it is sure,
Who has fun with us?

01:09 am

To move forward, it is necessary to be several,
To be true, it is necessary to be alone.
I abandon my poem
On a kitchen table,
I abandon as such, joints sparkle,
The writing of Orhan Pamuk is soothing,
I think of the mosques of Istanbul,
Le sens se cache, nous le fuyons tous…..

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2016-12-14 09:54 PM

Ahhh . . . Counting the seconds, the minutes, et al . . . Had to look u Orhan Pamuk. . .If you put him in your poem, he might be one to read . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2016-12-14 10:06 PM

thanks a lot Jerry, i am just beginning a novel called "le temps de l'innocence", from now it is solacing

yann

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2016-12-14 10:29 PM

Good luck on your novel, my friend!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2016-12-16 01:35 AM

quote:
To move forward, it is necessary to be several, To be true, it is necessary to be alone.

Very wise observation yann amongst your interesting poetry.

BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2016-12-16 08:08 AM

thanks bluesy, at some hour we might have good ideas, spontaneous verses

yann

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