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Open Poetry #49

To One From Another

Ari Squire
Member
Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane

0 posted 2016-12-13 06:07 PM

A darkened evening
Crisp glow illuminating tears

Depressing fingertips
Searching for silent wishes

A light enters my body
Guiding patterns forming words

Surrounding images blurred from view
As sentries guarding the Shimmering One

A diamond in a sea of broken glass
Her faceted brilliance enchanting

A "reluctance" to be known
Yet "led" to seek the winds

Our captive thoughts set free
To whirl and flail about

Two ribbons entangled in love
Never to be untied

Now through all our storms my love
Comes the beginning of eternity for you and I

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

[This message has been edited by Ari Squire (12-13-2016 07:46 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2016-12-13 06:41 PM

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2016-12-13 06:53 PM

Ahh . . . We find our own niche when the illumination of love comes our way, my friend. This niche can take place in a "darkened evening." What makes it so wonderful, is that the "light" which caressed you both to make love paramount within each other, so paramount you didn't have to say a word, it was all within each of your eyes.. .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Ari Squire
Member
Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane

3 posted 2016-12-13 07:50 PM

Thank you for reading and many thanks for your wise and inspiring comment.

You're one of a kind Sir Jerry.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2016-12-14 09:54 PM

love surely is a rebirth, I can feel that eveytime, and reading you too
yann

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

5 posted 2016-12-16 01:38 AM

quote:
A diamond in a sea of broken glass
Her faceted brilliance enchanting

"One in a million"...no doubt.

BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2016-12-16 08:40 PM

this is nice...james

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