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2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2016-12-01 10:24 PM

Between the too pointless words and the silence
It is a path
That it is advisable not to forget.

Also between the sun
And clouds
The man learns to climb.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2016-12-01 10:52 PM

Two three-line stanza's, which correlate big time with each other. Both has to do with survival. Excellent poetry, yann.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Boomer Styles
Member

since 2014-03-02

Posts 194
South Side Of Success

2 posted 2016-12-02 02:53 AM

Such ponderance in poetry, like a koan.

Very good yann.

One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many.

Ari Squire
Member
Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane

3 posted 2016-12-02 03:26 AM

Your poetry seems to tell us (if not warn us) to be cautious about repeating mistakes and admonishes us to seek a spiritual ascension.

Splendid poetry for thought yann.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2016-12-02 08:38 AM

very thought provoking Yann...I like that! ~L

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2016-12-02 12:06 PM

thanks Jerry, as you point it, this poem has been written for survival, at 6 in the morning in the country,

have a good day

yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2016-12-02 12:10 PM

thanks a lot boomer, I learn a mighty word here, a koan, it really means deep and thoughtful

have a good day

yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2016-12-02 12:14 PM

thanks ari, yes indeed, we have to be conscious more and more about a certain vacuity in the words we hear, specially with the technology impact

Have a good day

yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

8 posted 2016-12-02 12:15 PM

thanks lori, fortunately i am not in this mood every day,

have a good day
yann

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2016-12-07 11:29 PM

Always enjoy your thoughts, yann.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2016-12-07 11:51 PM

like this...james

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

11 posted 2016-12-08 06:41 PM

thanks Ida, i always wait for your precious comments

yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

12 posted 2016-12-08 06:42 PM

thanks james

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