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Snake Charmer
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Snake Charmer |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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we're wrapped in each others arms sans clothing . . . discarded our peculiars I'm filled with testosterone she has lured as would a snake charmer robed our fires supply our individual *piaculars seeking to find its concluding flameout we clench, saliva kisses; they are our mettle my chest pressed into her soft woman's pride her tongue, searching, finding, teeth biting her mouth to my thoughts conveyed pleading to reach the destination as one concerning the all-consuming fires down below my quivering soul overflows with love from my Goddess' devilishly kisses and nips I hover o'er the suspended brink of bliss her hands busy with reckless extravagance fluttering, seeking my soul and my heart's core enough! enough! I dissolve within myself head held high bellowing with *gasconade sounds from her brought on by new sensations and the collapsing corridors within her the night is ours, love is rambunctious ©November 10, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton *piaculars: sinful or wicked *gasconade: extravagant boasting ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
really superb, Jerry, images are more than tender, l like the hot atmosphere here and the hommage to lovers, specially when love can go crazy, what ab enticing reading have a good day yann |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . Many thanks are headed your way, yann, for your very kind review of "Snake Charmer." ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
quote:A man doesn't forget a woman's hands moving like that...and it's clear through your exciting poetry, that you didn't Jerry. Loved reading this. Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, you bet I didn't forget. Nothing quite like it on this old earth. Thanks Ari, for the nice comment. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
WoW! If I could find me one like that! Veeeerrrry sexy poem! It's great! One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! I hear you Boomer . . . I had one like her and lost her. Thank you for stopping by. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
So, this the answer you give to those who see you sitting quietly with a blank smile and ask... What are you smiling at?  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, yes, yessss, Rex! You have hit the nail on the head, and I thank you for it. You almost always make me smile . . . ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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