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Open Poetry #49

The Park

DaysofView
Member

since 2014-04-01

Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie

0 posted 2016-10-26 01:54 AM

I like this park.
let's find a bench
and sit for a while.

I've some kernels
the pigeons will love
they can dance for us as we talk

...and how those pigeons spark!

I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2016-10-26 09:53 AM

Ah . . . This poem touched me greatly. It brought back vivid memories of Central Park in New York. Nanette and I found our way to that park, that bench. Even the pigeons were in abundance. Thank you for the memories.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Ari Squire
Member
Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane

2 posted 2016-10-26 06:29 PM

Quite peaceful and calming poetry with a great image to set it all in.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2016-11-01 11:15 PM

very nice....james

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2016-11-03 12:07 PM

hmm. I envy your spot in this moment in time. Nice peaceful poem

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