Open Poetry #49 |
Columns Of Stone |
Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
It was a night caressed by warm summer breezes whose fingers were eager to do just what pleases The waters were tranquil and calm The stars shone so brightly yet touched my eyes lightly Moonbeams danced in sarongs Their ballroom was grand and each grain of sand reflected great crystalline splendor Huge columns of stone stood all alone what they've seen no man can remember But for their uses I found no excuses when searching my soul for content 'Til I can be free and she comes for me it's all memories which I have spent One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
quote:Good line here Boomer. It conjures up visions of Easter Island. Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Be-u-ta-ful, man. What stunning verses. All of them. You had to be possessed when writing this masterpiece! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
Thanks to you Jerry Pat for your extreme kindness. Thank you-thank you-thank-you! One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
Thanks to you too Ari! One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
You know how I feel about what you write! I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
so lovely words, sentiments are never closed and we seek for them everywhere, i have such experiences too, gave a good day yann |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
Yann, I'm pleased you stopped by. Thank you! One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Sounds like a memorable evening at the beach... Enjoyed |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
Thanks Rex. Appreciate the read. One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
a pleasure to read...nice flow...james |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
Thank you James for your kind words. One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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