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Open Poetry #49
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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2016-10-01 11:30 PM


I found you,
You did not come,
I am erased,

Now
The words do not have sense anymore,

I scratch the paper
To forget.

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Ari Squire
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Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane
1 posted 2016-10-02 03:10 AM


One can certainly feel the painfulness in your words yann. When I hurt, I find metaphors say what nothing else can.  

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2016-10-02 09:25 AM


Sorry . . . regret . . . lonesomeness . . . When love is forsaken, these three come to you in drips and drabs, or completely saturates you.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
3 posted 2016-10-02 01:38 PM


I used to scratch the paper to help forget, until I found that these memories, good or bad, define who I am in my heart and that's where I most often dip my quill.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2016-10-04 08:38 PM


reminded me of rejection...something I have lots of experience with...unfortunately...james
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