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Open Poetry #49

erased ?

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2016-10-01 11:30 PM

I found you,
You did not come,
I am erased,

Now
The words do not have sense anymore,

I scratch the paper
To forget.

Ari Squire
Member
Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane

1 posted 2016-10-02 03:10 AM

One can certainly feel the painfulness in your words yann. When I hurt, I find metaphors say what nothing else can.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2016-10-02 09:25 AM

Sorry . . . regret . . . lonesomeness . . . When love is forsaken, these three come to you in drips and drabs, or completely saturates you.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

3 posted 2016-10-02 01:38 PM

I used to scratch the paper to help forget, until I found that these memories, good or bad, define who I am in my heart and that's where I most often dip my quill.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2016-10-04 08:38 PM

reminded me of rejection...something I have lots of experience with...unfortunately...james

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