Open Poetry #49 |
New Morning |
soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
New Morning New morning, a blue mourning shrouds the inner landscape of me clouds and softness blossoming just on the outskirts of my dream if I thought of you now, I'd doom my heart into feathers and sky so I'm thinking of you now, my insides skittering like a dragonfly no wonder why this is love Blue dawning, a new longing daylight shaking sadly from my trees tonight the city is crumbling bust of anything that can set you free just on the tip of a finger, an inch from touching my resistance gate so I'm touching you now, my fears smashing into endless ocean waves that's exactly why I'm in love Close your eyes feel the night see the sewn-up wounds of the things you think you need tell your lies trace the light back to the arms of the moment you left hanging on me Open your eyes see the light feel the listless wonder of the things you think you want tell me true out the blue back to the arms of commitment and dreams you always haunt New morning, blue is adoring the way you smile away everything and set us upon new meaning just on the outskirts of my dream if I thought of you now, I'd burst into dancing on a sunlight sky and I'm thinking of just how you can kiss my life's rainclouds bye bye no wonder why that's exactly why I'm in love my heart of feathers and sky my insides skittering like a dragonfly by now you must see why this is love New morning, blue morning... __ "Whatever makes you weird is probably your greatest asset"-Joss Whedon |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
so beautiful;, we love mornings specially when we are in love, your words are delicate like the blue light yann |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So much to love, so much to mourn, so impeccably blue on you. Your poems are such special gifts!! |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Just a short breaths distance apart, the stanzas make your poetry blend so well. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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