navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #49 » Apparently
Open Poetry #49
Post A Reply Post New Topic Apparently Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2016-08-20 09:49 AM



Apparently
I have been distracted
by bits and pieces
of nonsense
fluttering about my head
like butterflies.
I have sat like a bump
letting things slide by
unnoticed,
like my left pinky finger
I thought I sprained
months ago.
It gives no pain
and bends just fine.
But it wasn’t until
a day or so ago
I realized that
bending was all
that pinky could do.
I can’t straighten it out
for love nor money.
Apparently I broke it.
Now I feel foolish.
How does a person
overlook a thing
like that?



© Copyright 2016 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2016-08-20 10:40 AM


I don't understand how a person could overlook something like that. But it is common for people (myself included) to make light of their injuries. Are you gonna leave it that way, or go to the doctor and have him re-break it and put some kind of a cast on it so it will heal?

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2016-08-20 10:52 AM


think I'll leave it alone, it isn't "crooked" it just looks "relaxed" -probably why it took me so long to see it wouldn't straighten out. Silly me. ~L
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2016-08-20 11:10 AM


Cool, let it hang there, I know I would.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Redstart
Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535

4 posted 2016-08-20 11:17 AM


Knowing your writing, there's more than a pinky at work here. 'Apparently' would suggest input from others, but you know your pinky.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
5 posted 2016-08-20 04:06 PM


Redstart, I don't know what made me happen to notice my pinky, when I did. ~L
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #49 » Apparently

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary