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A Few Moments With Redstart
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A Few Moments With Redstart |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
Hey, I went into the garden, just after Jerry's post to one of mine. I like Jerry, he's honest, and he can write. I sat there, at the table at the bottom of the garden, and a lil' ol' hedgehog nestled up to my feet. He didn't seem frightened; he just sniffed and scurried into the Irises. I'm not happy with the Irises: they are prolific but, orange. I always wanted blue and yellow irises. Blue and yellow irises remind me of being a boy. I was a boy once; I liked to climb trees and find birds' nests. I often feel guilty about the happiness of my childhood; many never knew such bliss. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
kinda silly!! How 'bout an evening with redstart!! Not 'xactly a poem, but sorta okay!! I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Don't usually comment of these kinds of post since the aren't poetry, but I have to this one because "Jerry" was there also. Enjoy these "few moment with" you Redstart. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
If you put line breaks in the right places you have a poem that is not too unlike some of Jerry's. Enjoyed the moments! ~L Hey, I went into the garden, just after Jerry's post to one of mine. I like Jerry, he's honest, and he can write. I sat there, at the table at the bottom of the garden, and a lil' ol' hedgehog nestled up to my feet. He didn't seem frightened; he just sniffed and scurried into the Irises. I'm not happy with the Irises: they are prolific but, orange. I always wanted blue and yellow irises. Blue and yellow irises remind me of being a boy. I was a boy once; I liked to climb trees and find birds' nests. I often feel guilty about the happiness of my childhood; many never knew such bliss. |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
Hey, I'm not the world's greatest at thanking folk for their replies, but thank you for the time and the reply. That is a nice touch. x |
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