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Will you walk with me?
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Will you walk with me? |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Will you walk with me? In the crimson sunrise When the world's new promise And all fair dreams arise … Will you walk with me?! In the flaming sunset When the world is mellow And all long cares depart … Will you walk with me?! In the spring's first bloom When the world renews And all old 'hurts' unwind … Will you walk with me?! In the summer's sunshine When the world seems young And all new hopes unfurl ... Will you walk with me?! In the Autumn's passion When the world retreats And all warm feelings change ... Will you walk with me?! In the Winter’s sadness When the world reflects And all old wounds reopen ... Will you walk with me?! --- b. e. adams ('here' in the 'now') |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Wonderful thoughts, and hopefully you won't be alone on that walk, Bruce! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks, JP ! |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Splendid poetry and a splendid idea Bruce. Let me get my stick and we'll be off! Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you, Ari ! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
A keeper Bruce. Ida |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you, Ida !! [To bad it likely had 'no effect' on the actual subject and recipient of it] |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
I'll walk with you through both. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks you for commenting on this ever-so-humble li'l "poetic scribble!" ... |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
I hope someone nice walks that walk with you. Anyone who wouldn't when asked, is not someone you want to ask again. You're such a good poet. I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Bruce, She will always be walking with you as you think of her always and always will. Best to you,JO |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks "D.o.V." and Jo !! |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
Keep scribbling. I rather like it, but don't sort me out from the rest, buddy, when I post a sincere reply. Keep your exclamation marks, and your tatty replies to yourself. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I'll use exclamation points and any kind of reply that I want anytime I want !!! |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
Hey, you get on and do that. And I'll just ignore you. How's that? |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
There's no more of a beloved poet here at Pip than Bruce Adams. He's a gentle soul that doesn't deserve your sarcasm Red. To be ignored by anyone taking umbrage with Bruce, is a most welcome compliment that I too, would enjoy. Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I am QUITE HAPPY to have you "ignore me," 'Red' !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you so much, Ari for the support. [Some folks sure are 'touchy' about the smallest things.] |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Hold on Bruce! Let me put on my new Nikes and I'll be right with ya. Namyh |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you for commenting on this ever-so-humble li'l "poetic scribble" ... |
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