Open Poetry #49 |
c a d m i u m |
Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
tenderness: is the rope you bond your/self with~ c a d m i u m~ we lay in silence not like lovers in a bed borrowed with moonlight its dark palms run heavy over stills and ashes and mantles of night autumn will claim her bride --one body among silver and red draw watch as she settles in over spine and blue wings here i am left leashed and brooding still-- unspoken-- coupled with silence over black earth how the moon will come to taunt my path and soul's desire as i wait--i wait drowning in amber emptiness and the crumbling grace of stones each grain, each particle of dust that falls is blown softly from your cupped hands why silence fills you in form of beauty i will never understand why the season of air is between palm and prayer grain and sand i will never understand the press of body is a confession in broken glass and scattered light my echos haunt dreams and warm flesh longing only to bury the grey of stones &remind me i am always with-in the shades of you between echo and dream bidding farewell chris williamson my muse, my love ~~**~~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . The last stanza made this poem, Greeneyes. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poetry is deep and introspective and your style is exquisite..just as i remember you. Such a nice surprise to see you here sweet one. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
thanks guys, been a long time |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my! Long time no read, and well worth the wait. Beautiful Lauren, and loved the imagery in this poem. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Still a powerfully beautiful poet..and this is as good as ever...thank you...Goldenrose |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Nice to see you here again Miss L....and with a deep and thoughtful poem as well....stay a while? |
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