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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2016-08-04 05:39 AM





Christmas morning, daylight dawning
Pictures pinned on kitchen wall
Pregnant parcels under pine tree branches
Winter Wellies discarded in the hall
~
Colour dresses, golden tresses
Daisy chains in summer rain
Clamour for their bedtime story
‘Please daddy, read it just once again’
~
Noble knights on snow white chargers
Maidens peep from downcast eyes
While fairies stare in scary wonder
As Miss Pouncher rides the starlit skies
~
Smothered giggles find smuggled chocolate
Underneath bedtime pillows
Secret whispers in the playtime garden
Safe beneath the hanging willow
~
I look on four assorted females
Not one boy, am I to blame?
Away with all these futile wishes
But I’ll settle for a thousand kisses
Children are children, so why complain?

© Copyright 2016 Cari - All Rights Reserved
Ari Squire
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In The Phallus Lane
1 posted 2016-08-04 12:28 PM


I'm sure your four will love this. I liked it a great deal Cari. Fun to read and imagine your busy household and being the only 'boy' under the roof. The "Girl Power" will only increase...buckle up!

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2016-08-04 03:38 PM


That was delightful! I think in hindsight you'll find all that girl power will have made you a better man. Boys are easy. ~L
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2016-08-05 10:31 PM


enjoyed...james
Redstart
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4 posted 2016-08-06 11:41 AM


You can write poetry, and you are blessed with a heart.
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2016-08-09 02:49 PM


Aww, i love it, you captured quite a Rockwell moment.  
Cari
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Englnand
6 posted 2016-08-14 05:24 AM


To be honest I wouldn’t change a thing. Sorry to say I’m taking a break, home and work pressure, loved sharing my scribbles with you all and enjoyed reading your work. Hopefully I’ll pop in now and again. You all take care now.

Cari.

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