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Open Poetry #49
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Jack Napes
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since 2014-02-22
Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb
0 posted 2014-02-26 10:14 AM

love passed by my window
all of five-foot-four
relish on the table
anyone know the score?

a hellish night in 'frisco
led me to believe
a tenderloin is tasted
just above the knee

she left without a whisper
in the ear left by the door
I could have loved her better
if I would have loved her more

Touch, but don't look
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2014-02-26 10:21 AM

Short, sweet and very much to the point!

Lori
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2014-02-26 11:06 AM

Dittos what Lori said.

~*~ It's not that the man did not know how to juggle, he just didn't have the balls to do it. ~*~
secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
3 posted 2014-02-26 12:06 PM

VERY fine 'penning,' indeed !
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