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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2016-08-01 06:12 PM

You are my heaven and earth.
Yours are the stars that guide me.
You are my moon,
whose romantic beams
I bask in.
You are my sunrise and sunset.
You are the highlights
of my each and every day.
You are stronger than
any sticks or stones
that would break my bones
or any words that ever hurt me
You are my everything
and everything I’m worth.
You are my heaven and earth.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2016-08-01 07:38 PM

Damn, Lori, don't hold anything back . . . Let him know exactly how you feel. Heh.Heh

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2016-08-01 07:44 PM

Oh you bet I will, just as soon as he gets back home. heh heh

~L

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2016-08-01 09:54 PM

I believe you.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2016-08-01 10:29 PM

wow...nice...james

Ari Squire
Member
Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane

5 posted 2016-08-02 02:29 AM

To have someone that accepts your expressiveness fearlessly is a truly wonderful mate to have. Many poets find their muse in solitude, but to write as you have here Lori, tells us you have someone who cares. Wonderful poetry.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2016-08-02 07:20 AM

Thanks James! ~L

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2016-08-02 07:25 AM

Ari,
I know I am loved very much. He accepts my love poems so well he has forbidden me to buy him greeting cards because he likes what I write better. I am blessed. ~L

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

8 posted 2016-08-03 01:07 PM

Lori - After a half century of 'heaven and earth' bliss, I know exactly how you feel. Enjoy every bit of it all while you can........and maybe even write a poem or two. Nice work Lori. Namyh

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

9 posted 2016-08-03 09:22 PM

thanks Namyh! ~L

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