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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2016-08-01 10:58 AM




He up and left me
In the wind west to mountains
Gonna miss that man

Just him on the bike
Before he gets too old to
Ride like that again

Just him and the guys
Taking it day at a time
Colorado bound


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2016-08-01 11:03 AM


Ahhh . . . You're not making that trip this time . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2016-08-01 11:12 AM


Work schedule won't allow. ~L
OwlSA
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3 posted 2016-08-01 12:48 PM


Ahh, Lori, life getting in the way of life . . . sigh!
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2016-08-01 03:11 PM


Yes indeed it is. I'm 58 and having a hard time feeling like a grown up about it. LOL!
~L

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2016-08-01 10:21 PM


nice writing...james
Redstart
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6 posted 2016-08-15 10:41 PM


Hey, he won't be gone long. Kinda like Mike and Frank; in love with their bikes.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2016-08-16 06:29 PM


thanks James! ~L
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2016-08-16 06:32 PM


It was a great trip for him, he really needed it and I was glad he went. I survived. ~L
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