Open Poetry #49 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Another year. What's that dear? You gonna gripe Eh, you're the type. What does that mean? Don't start a scene. You moan each year About your fears Of getting old You sit and mold. You do the same On age you blame Arthritic hurts You wear loose shirts But I don't whine Into my wine Like you do nights You're quite a sight You just won't do Just stop and quit You won't let me make love Because it bends when pushed That didn't rhyme, Well that's no crime ©July2, 2016. / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (07-19-2016 10:56 AM).] |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
JP: This so funny. I can in-vision a sit-com from the old TV days. "one of these days, Alice, POW! Straight to the moon! Enjoyed, my friend. Thanks for the smile... JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
Ah a poem on the creeping journey on the last lap. Way to go for me and the wife still has her James Bond license to thrill. Don’t you get morbid now, remember your beliefs. One story ends but another is waiting to begin, think about all those hearts you’ll break next time around and maybe just maybe I’ll be applauding in the stands when you raise the Claret Jug. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Happy you got a chuckle or two from my poem. I meant for it to be humorous. Thanks again. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, the years creep upon us for sure, Cari. Good to know your soulmate still has her "James Bond license to thrill." That's cool. Thank you for dropping by. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Hey, we'll all get there, graciously or not, it creeps and haunts our dreams {and bring us gifts of arthritic fingers and toes..} |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
When you're right, you're right, jjote! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
"You won't let me make love because it bends when pushed"! Oh my! Billy after a six pack! OMG! I'll be laffing out loud for a long time Jerrypat! If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heh.Heh Laugh away, laugh away, DV. Happy you found the humor within the poem. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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