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JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

0 posted 2016-07-19 09:35 AM

My heart void of reason
collects windy evening
thoughts of you…

Thoughts fluttering like leaves
shimmering with sunset –

warm and glowing sleepy smile
simply asking:
‘will tonight bring dreams of you?’

Hoping joy is at your side,
praying peace is your friend,
wishing you too, an evening of repose…

And so, swirls of wind push about
conducting inner smiles –
hard kept secretes,
enouncing, evermore clear
you and I…

Swirling thoughts trying desperately to escape,
and fly away with the wind of time…

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2016-07-19 09:48 AM

Perfect is this poem of remembering someone special. Would love to reach out with your arms, but have to settle with these reaching words and hope somehow she can absorb them. Nice work.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2016-07-19 11:36 AM

Thank you JP! Very nice reply, my friend.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2016-07-19 01:00 PM

Wow! That was beautiful! The wind was perfectly played! ~L

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2016-07-19 04:43 PM

Love this so much, reads like a warm caress as well as a welcome shiver and touch of tingle.

So pretty JL.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2016-07-19 04:57 PM

Thanks, Lori. You got me smiling.

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Thank you Blues! What a nice reply.

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Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2016-07-20 09:18 AM

don't let the wind run away with your happy memories.
they're a treasure to keep.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2016-07-21 02:41 PM

wind and memory, equating nature with life, and loving the melody...beautifully done.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

8 posted 2016-07-22 10:04 AM

Thank you, jjote. I'll try to hold on to my memories, but I must admit, I am looking forward to being with the LORD and forgetting my sojourning in this world.

Thanks!!
JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

9 posted 2016-07-22 10:05 AM

LeeJ,
Thank you.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2016-07-25 10:28 PM

nice writing...james

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

11 posted 2016-08-06 06:30 AM

Excellent writing JL.
Ida

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