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Open Poetry #49

Love Is Mere' Her Scent

Redstart
Senior Member

since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

0 posted 2016-07-18 08:47 PM

I know that love is mere' her scent
It lingered there as I awoke
As into love's warm-breast ascent
I died on every word she spoke
For every second that we spent
No other could such joy evoke

Great artists' dreams could not enhance
Her beauty in that black shift dress
When gifted of her claiming glance
No ounce of love could I suppress
So know that I will ever dance
In her undying tenderness

The softness of her inner thighs
The fruits of love that tantalise
My whispered name on entry sighs
Sweet passion reached, no compromise
Those melting sapphires in her eyes
That's love, I've come to realise.

[This message has been edited by Redstart (07-20-2016 12:34 PM).]

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2016-07-18 08:49 PM

so beautiful, tantalizing, i enjoyed every word and verse

yann

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2016-07-18 09:17 PM

This is one of, if not THE, best poem of love I have ever friggin' read, man.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2016-07-19 06:52 AM

Yes! A love poem that pushes all the right romantic buttons! lovely! ~L

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2016-07-20 09:22 AM

a lovely tribute to undying love. Ahhh... so romantic, it makes one swoon.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2016-07-21 01:10 PM

Lovely love poem

soul drifter
Senior Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

6 posted 2016-07-22 11:12 AM

"I died on every word she spoke"

Perfectly put. I've felt the same way many times myself.

"So know that I will ever dance
In her undying tenderness"

Now that is a killer line, the kind I'd give my right arm to have written. Beautiful stuff all around. Great work.

"He turns his money into light to look for her" - U2, 'Lemon'

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